Band 8 esse qanday koʻrinishini bilmasangiz, oʻz yozganingizni qanday baholashni ham bilmaysiz. Shuning uchun bu maqolada bitta haqiqiy "discuss both views" (ikki qarashni muhokama qilish) savoli uchun toʻliq Band 8 namuna esseni beramiz va keyin uni IELTS ekspertlari baholaydigan toʻrt mezon boʻyicha qadam-baqadam ochib beramiz. Maqsad — "qanday yozilgan" emas, "nima uchun aynan shu ball" degan savolga aniq javob.
Savol (Discuss both views turi)
Quyidagi savol ustida ishlaymiz — bu IELTS Academic Writing Task 2 da eng koʻp uchraydigan turlardan biri:
Some people believe that university education should be free for all students, while others think students should pay for it themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Eslatma: Task 2 da kamida 250 soʻz yozish talab qilinadi va sizga taxminan 40 daqiqa vaqt beriladi (Task 1 va Task 2 uchun jami 60 daqiqa). Soʻz limitidan kam yozsangiz, Task Response mezonida ball tushadi.
Band 8 namuna esse
Quyidagi javob ~290 soʻzdan iborat va toʻrt mezon boʻyicha Band 8 darajasiga mos:
The question of who should bear the cost of higher education has become increasingly contentious. While some argue that university tuition should be funded entirely by the state, others maintain that students themselves ought to pay. In my view, although free education is an admirable goal, a shared system in which the government subsidises those most in need is the more realistic approach.
Those who support free university education tend to emphasise equality of opportunity. When tuition is removed, talented young people from low-income families are no longer excluded from higher learning simply because they cannot afford it. Finland, for example, charges its own citizens no tuition fees, and this policy is widely credited with producing a highly skilled and socially mobile workforce. Supporters therefore see free education as an investment that ultimately benefits the entire economy.
On the other hand, those who believe students should pay point to the considerable financial burden that free tuition places on taxpayers. Funding every place at university requires substantial public spending, which may force governments to cut budgets for healthcare or infrastructure. Moreover, when students contribute to their own education, they arguably take their studies more seriously, since they have a personal stake in the outcome.
Having weighed both arguments, I believe the most sensible solution lies between these two extremes. Universities should not be free for everyone, but generous grants and interest-free loans should ensure that no capable student is turned away on financial grounds. This balances fairness with fiscal responsibility.
In conclusion, while wholly free education is appealing in principle, a targeted system of support is more practical. Governments should prioritise helping disadvantaged students rather than subsidising those who can comfortably afford to pay.
Nega bu esse Band 8 — mezonma-mezon tahlil
IELTS Writing Task 2 toʻrt teng mezon boʻyicha baholanadi, har biri umumiy ballning 25 foizini tashkil etadi: Task Response, Coherence and Cohesion, Lexical Resource va Grammatical Range and Accuracy. Endi har birini koʻrib chiqamiz.
1. Task Response (savolga javob)
Savol "ikki qarashni muhokama qil va oʻz fikringni ayt" deydi — esse aynan shuni bajaradi: bitta paragraf bepul taʼlim tarafdorlariga, bitta paragraf qarshi tomonga, keyin muallifning aniq pozitsiyasi. Eng muhimi — fikr kirishda ham, xulosada ham bir xil ("shared / targeted support" tizimi). Har bir qarash misol va sabab bilan toʻliq rivojlantirilgan (Finlandiya misoli, soliq toʻlovchilarga yuk, talabaning masʼuliyati).
Maslahat: Band 8 uchun pozitsiyangiz butun esse davomida bir xil va aniq boʻlishi shart. "It depends" deb noaniq qolsangiz yoki fikringizni faqat oxirida aytsangiz, Task Response 6 ga tushadi.
2. Coherence and Cohesion (mantiq va bogʻlanish)
Esse aniq tuzilishga ega: kirish → tarafdorlar → muxoliflar → muallif fikri → xulosa. Har bir paragraf bitta asosiy gʻoyaga bagʻishlangan (one idea per paragraph). Bogʻlovchilar tabiiy va xilma-xil: While, On the other hand, Moreover, Having weighed both arguments, In conclusion. Bu yerda muhim nuqta — bogʻlovchilar gap boshiga zoʻrlab tiqilmagan, balki maʼno oqimiga mos kelgan.
3. Lexical Resource (soʻz boyligi)
Band 8 uchun mavzuga oid aniq, tabiiy leksika kerak. Esseda kuchli, lekin sunʼiy boʻlmagan iboralar bor:
- bear the cost — xarajatni koʻtarish
- equality of opportunity — imkoniyatlar tengligi
- a socially mobile workforce — ijtimoiy harakatchan ishchi kuchi
- a financial burden on taxpayers — soliq toʻlovchilarga moliyaviy yuk
- fiscal responsibility — moliyaviy masʼuliyat
Bular "katta soʻzlar" emas, balki toʻgʻri kontekstda ishlatilgan aniq soʻzlar — aynan shu narsa Band 8 ni Band 6 dan ajratadi.
4. Grammatical Range and Accuracy (grammatika)
Esseda murakkab tuzilmalar xato qilmasdan ishlatilgan:
- Relative clause (ergash gap): ...talented young people from low-income families are no longer excluded...
- Participle clause (ravishdosh oboroti): Having weighed both arguments, I believe...
- Adverbial clause (payt ergash gapi): When tuition is removed, ... are no longer excluded.
- Passive (majhul nisbat): this policy is widely credited with...
Gap uzunligi ham xilma-xil — qisqa va uzun gaplar almashinib turadi. Band 8 mezonida "koʻpchilik gaplar xatosiz" boʻlishi talab qilinadi, "umuman xato yoʻq" emas (bu Band 9).
Maslahat: Murakkab grammatikani koʻrsataman deb chalkash, haddan tashqari uzun gaplar yozmang. Band 8 da aniqlik murakkablikdan kam emas — xatosiz oddiy gap, xatoli murakkab gapdan yuqori baholanadi.
Oʻz esseingizni Band 8 ga qanday yetkazasiz
- Har doim aniq pozitsiya tanlang va uni boshdan oxirigacha saqlang.
- Har bir paragrafda bitta gʻoyani sabab va misol bilan toʻliq oching.
- Mavzuga oid 5–6 ta aniq ibora oʻrganing — umumiy "good/bad/important" dan voz keching.
- 2–3 turdagi murakkab gapni xatosiz ishlatishni mashq qiling.
- Yozganingizni mustaqil baholatib oling — bu eng tez oʻsish yoʻli.
Oʻz esseingiz qaysi mezonda nechta ball olishini bilmoqchimisiz? IELTS Writing tekshirish xizmatimiz esseingizni toʻrt mezon boʻyicha baholaydi va aynan qayerda ball yoʻqotayotganingizni koʻrsatadi. Umumiy darajangizni bilmasangiz, avval ingliz tili daraja testini ishlab koʻring. Tayyor boʻlsangiz — hisob yarating va bugun birinchi esseingizni tekshiring.